Ok this is the end…
Where I lie down
And stop my heart
Because this beating
Is making it so I cant sleep
It tangles with your screaming
And rips me apart
Your goodbyes are tired
And tattered
Your I love yous are gone
You hold me
Watch as I fall apart
And don’t do anything
Hush now
Don’t worry
I will be fine
Scream now
And worry
Your world is leaving right before your eyes
Yes now it is over
Two years too long
Our hearts bleeding
From the battles of holding on
And the victory of letting go
This is where we write goodbye
And know it was never wanted
And this is where our last kiss was given
And this is where out last I love yous were said
Ok this is the end…
Where I lie down
And stop my heart
Kristen Hope Mazzola 
Shell Ochsner
April 7, 2013
I found myself holding my breath as I read your poem. Your writing generates powerful emotional responses.
Kristen Mazzola
April 7, 2013
Thank you! I am so touched when other people can feel the words and it evokes an emotional response
Felie Marie
April 7, 2013
Nice.
Kristen Mazzola
April 7, 2013
Thanks!
Seb
April 7, 2013
That poem is like a runaway train, but with no wreck at the end!
Kristen Mazzola
April 7, 2013
I guess that’s one way to look at it…
theeditoffice
April 7, 2013
Good stuff.
Kristen Mazzola
April 7, 2013
Thank you!
Joy U.K.
April 7, 2013
Pulls at the heart strings :[
Good luck with the remaining days of your challenge!
I’ll be stopping by for more 🙂
PS: thanks for following my blog~
Joy U.K.
April 7, 2013
Whups- i meant liking my blog haha
Kristen Mazzola
April 7, 2013
I’m following it anyways so no worries! 🙂
Kristen Mazzola
April 7, 2013
Thanks for reading my stuff Joy and for stopping by! I really enjoyed your blog! 🙂
hotsouthernmess
April 7, 2013
This has a familiar ring to it. LOVE it! But sad! 🙂
Kristen Mazzola
April 7, 2013
I’m glad you enjoyed it!
hughiegibson
April 7, 2013
Very foreboding, i felt every ounce leaving.
Kristen Mazzola
April 7, 2013
=)
riz
April 7, 2013
You are brave to post such an motions piece. I must say it’s very raw and moving… 🙂 thanks for dropping by my blog 😀
Kristen Mazzola
April 7, 2013
You’re very welcome and Thank you for dropping by…I don’t know if it is true bravery, but maybe a little bit 🙂
riz
April 7, 2013
Well, In itself, i think writing a poem takes courage. 🙂 Cheers to more poems written!
Kristen Mazzola
April 7, 2013
You are right, thanks =) I’ll be writing at least one everyday for this month and I cant see it stopping after the 30th…
riz
April 7, 2013
Wow great idea! I hope I could do that too! Will give it a try. 😀
Kristen Mazzola
April 7, 2013
Its National Poem Writing Month! http://www.napowrimo.net/ You should join in! Its really interesting to see what everone is coming up with! 🙂
riz
April 7, 2013
Thanks! Yup I already joined but I hope I could still continue after April. It’s getting pretty hard for me even now. But yes, let’s do this!
Kristen Mazzola
April 8, 2013
That’s awesome!! I’ll be following along to read what you come up with! 🙂 I’m sure it will all be brilliant!
riz
April 10, 2013
Thanks so much! 🙂
Kathi
April 8, 2013
Very sad. I hope it’s not too autobiographical…or if it is…it’s in the past and you’re on to a new beginning.
Kristen Mazzola
April 8, 2013
It is, but from far in the past, thankfully 🙂